Saturday, April 08, 2006

Hope

If it’s all dark,
If smoke is all over,
If nothing is clear;

If days are lifeless,
If nights are slumberless,
If dreams are shattered;

If beats become dormant,
If senses do not respond;
If breath is stopping,

If silence is biting,
If reality is creepy,
If truth is scary;

If relations are ending,
If nobody is listening;
If trust is lost,

If self is dying,
If esteem is dead,
If spirit is rusting;

If life becomes numb,
If death is pleasing,
If staying is fearful;

Everything can be fine,
You can be alive again,
You can be happy again;

You just don’t leave me,
I am always there,
I am Hope.

5 comments:

Anonymous said...

"You just don’t leave me,
I am always there,
I am Hope."
nice one.....

-skumar

Anonymous said...

nice one be...

-p3

chandan said...

another good one :) ...

Anonymous said...

hi deepak
yes you are right that when nobody is there
there is always a HOPE
i will never forget that day when i was so depressed n you are the only person who brings me hope for doing something good and hope 4 the positive .
i m quite satisfied today
ok bye
keep writing shikha

Anonymous said...

Now this one is really a gud effort and good words used
cant give any suggestion except that tryu to use some rhymes in paragraphs
but they r not necessary they just intensify the effect
Take care buddy
Luv
Anks