Tuesday, April 11, 2006

Sorrow

Go away,
Go away;
I beg you go away;

My treasure has all depleted,
I have nothing to give now;

Go away,
Go away,
I beg you go away;

My memories are all lost,
I have nothing to loose now;

Go away,
Go away,
I beg you go away;

I am all alone, all alone;
I have no one close now,

Go away,
Go away,
I beg you go away;

Don’t drown me any more,
I am already at the bottom;

Go away,
Go away,
I beg you go away;

Or

Execute me…..

4 comments:

Deepak Vyas said...

Godgiri macha raha hai be tu to .....

-skumar

Anonymous said...

cool... be touching...

Anonymous said...

add me in your fan list....

Anonymous said...

touching peice
well the repetitive words put a gud effect
suggestion-- dont repaet the same words throughout
try repeating 3 or 4 group of words
like in some lines "go far" and in some " leave me 'lone"
like this ok it would be more effective that way
take care buddy
luv u
Anks